Skip to content
  • Journal
  • Music
  • The Dolor Series
  • Fox Island
  • Scherdal
  • Legendary
  • Short Stories
  • Facebook

Keith G. Alderman

  • Under the Spell


    Under the Spell

    Chapter 7

    “Why did you say I can’t help Herbert?” Esther asked the Monster, who was again sitting in Mr. Dolor’s recliner. She stood in front of the couch, arms akimbo and fists on hips.

    “You won’t be able to find his door,” the Monster said, flatly. 

    Esther scrunched up her face and crossed her arms. She wandered in a circle, wrung her hands, and stared at the stairway. 

    The Monster leaned back in the recliner. “Not all doors lead to where you want,” he said. “You need to search for the right door if you want the right answer.” 

    “How am I supposed to save my brother?” 

    “You might not be able to.” 

    Just then, Esther heard someone’s footsteps coming down the stairwell. She looked up to see a short, hunched man with a hump on his back. He was stocky, wore dirty clothes, and carried a cane to help him balance. A bandage covered his left ear. On his right shoulder, the raven perched and glared at Esther and the Monster. 

    “You stupid oaf,” the short man hollered at the Monster. “First you get me injured, then you bring this maggot back to the house. What are you doing?” 

    “Something told me we made a mistake,” the Monster replied.

    The short man took a box of matches from his jacket pocket and lit a stick on fire. The Monster jumped from the recliner and curled over in submission. Fritz threw the match at the Monster. 

    “I’m sorry, Fritz!” the Monster screamed and cowered away from the flicked match. He scurried to the other side of the living room and Fritz chased him around the room, throwing lit matches at him. 

    Esther fell onto the couch and covered her face. She couldn’t comprehend what was happening and felt bad for the Monster. She peered through the cracks in her fingers and watched Fritz chasing him.

    “This is why I threw you in with that witch in the wood,” Fritz cackled as he threw another match. “To disappear for good, you dummy!” 


    “Where did he go?” Marian whispered. The wood slats stopped rumbling. No more voice. No more shuffling on the other side. Herbert was screaming, talking to them, and then, nothing. 

    She fell to her knees and cried, “Where is he, Aaron!” 

    Aaron punched the ceiling and tried to make it budge. “C’mon, Herbert,” he shouted. He rammed his body into the wood, but it would not bend. He yelled out his name and begged for him to answer. 

    “Not again,” Aaron whimpered. “Not again.” 

    “Did someone take him? He said he wasn’t alone. Oh, God! What if something happened to him?” 

    “Something already has happened to him,” Aaron replied. “C’mon, we can’t get through this way. We gotta try something else.”

    “Where are we?” Marian continued crying. “I don’t know this house anymore.” She leaned against the railing and closed her eyes. Everything since dinner was topsy-turvy. “Mom would know what to do,” she panted.

    Aaron slapped the floor. “Of course! Your parents. Let’s get them.”

    “The song,” Marian replied. 

    “We have to try!” Aaron caught his breath and crouched in the middle of the hall. Dust and dirt floated in the surrounding air. 

    “How do we open her door?” 

    “We’ll knock,” he implored.

    Marian put her head in her hands, feeling waves of desperation and panic crashing over her one after the other. 

    “Listen,” Aaron put his hand on her shoulder, “I’ve never had what you have. Instead, I got a lot of feeling hopeless. My dad. My mom. But hopeless situations make you realize something. You can get through them if you keep going. It’s just like the swamp in the enchanted forest. Keep swimming and something good will come along.” 

    Marian nodded her head. She leaned forward on her knees and hands, crouching next to Aaron. He nodded at her in the darkness and led the way toward the stairway.

    A blast of sound echoed through the house. The gong was chiming again, and the stairs shook underneath them. They covered their ears as it rattled down the walls and wrenched the house back and forth. The hum fluttered in the air a moment longer until it decayed away and the piano’s melody punched through again in its mesmerizing lull.


    Esther was listening to the gong, too, at the bottom of the house. Fritz shrieked at the sound and quit throwing matches. He turned and flew up the stairs in a fury. The raven puffed its wings into the air and disappeared around the corner of the dining-room.

    The Monster stood from his cowering position and drew near to Esther on the couch. He stood still next to her and appeared ashamed. His hand went to his face to wipe a tear away, but there weren’t any on it. He remembered he couldn’t cry and put his hand down. He straightened his back and stood stiff as a tree. “I don’t like fire,” he whispered.

    Esther nodded and smiled sheepishly. “We can’t stay in this house,” she whispered to herself. She was talking about her family, but realized the Monster probably thought she meant the two of them. She looked up at him. He was staring at her. 

    “Where else would you go?” The Monster asked.

    “It’s too dangerous,” she said. 

    “Dangerous?” The Monster echoed. He looked up at the ceiling and closed his eyes. He spoke as if reciting something he heard from long ago: “Have you never wanted to do anything dangerous? Where should we be if no one wanted to do anything ‘dangerous’? Have you never wanted to look beyond the clouds or discover what changes darkness into light? I want to find what is eternity. Those things are only in ‘dangerous’.” 

    “That’s really pretty,” Esther said. 

    “My creator said it,” the Monster looked at the burnt matches on the ground. “Right before he made his greatest abomination.” 

    “What?”

    “Me.” Lightning lit the room and Esther thought the Monster looked sad. Though his scars and ugliness covered any sort of clear sign.


    Marian and Aaron crept down the steps. Each foot moved like a sloth’s hesitating paw and displaced the weight of the children. A floorboard creaked under Marian’s foot and the children froze in place. Aaron’s eyes raced along the bottom of the steps and he listened for any movement. 

    A deep, frightening voice came around the corner. “It’s beautiful,” it said. And Aaron wondered what that could mean.

    “Someone is in the living-room,” he mouthed to Marian. 

    She nodded, and the two crept even slower down the steps. Aaron leaned on the railing and his feet touched the floor. He lowered himself and crawled into the dining-room. He waited for Marian to pass and lead the rest of the way.

    She slithered toward the hall, taking a detour through the pantry. Around it, behind the bottom of the stairwell, just at the far end of the dark hallway, was Mr. and Mrs. Dolor’s bedroom. 

    “Okay,” Marian said to herself, and closed her eyes. 

    Tap. Tap. Tap.

    “That’s the noise!” Aaron whispered. The kids looked up, down, backward, forward, left, and right before the peculiar jittering hop of a large black raven on the far side of the hall caught their eye. Its little feet chattered across the floorboards like teeth. It stared at the children and rapped its beak into the floorboards.

    Tap. Tap. Tap.

    “That’s the tapping from outside Herbert’s door,” Aaron exclaimed and Marian nodded in comprehension. 

    The bird spread its wings and fluttered out of the shadows and back toward the living-room and stairway. Marian and Aaron glanced back and forth at one another. They turned back to the parent’s bedroom. Candlelight flickered under its jamb. 

    “That’s my parent’s door,” Marian whispered. 

    The children tiptoed forward and Marian tapped on the door. It creaked open from the touch and Marian realized the door had already been opened by someone. She peered inside. The red and gold queen-sized bed stood in the middle of two cherry end-tables. Golden curtains framed the window’s view of the stormy night outside. In the corner, the closet door was cracked open. Mrs. Dolor sat next to it at a white vanity, staring into the mirror.

    “Mom!” Marian ran inside and embraced her mother. 

    “Marian,” Mrs. Dolor said. “What are you doing here? It’s the middle of the night.” 

    “Hello, Mrs. Dolor.” Aaron stepped forward and looked around the room like he expected to find someone telling him to leave.

    “Mom,” Marian said, “Don’t you see what’s going on? The monsters. The piano playing by itself. The house getting all creepy. The Professor is a vampire.”

    Mrs. Dolor exhaled and shook her head. “Not all that again, Marian.” she waved her hand at her. “Is this why you came into my room in the middle of the night and woke me up?” 

    “But Mom, you aren’t sleeping.” Marian looked at the vanity in front of her mother. “You’re sitting at your make-up desk.” 

    Mrs. Dolor looked at the desk, confused. “Oh,” she chucked, “how did I get here?” 

    “Mom, it’s the song!” Marian took her hand. “It’s doing something to you. You have to believe me! Something terrible is happening to the house. It’s haunted. There are monsters, vampires, and goblins. Mom, please, believe me!” 

    “Marian.” Mrs. Dolor smiled and touched Marian’s cheek. “It was a nightmare, baby. Go back to sleep.” 

    “I can’t go to sleep!” Marian shook her mother’s shoulders. “Because I can’t go to my room! Herbert’s been taken! Esther’s missing—”

    “Where is your brother?” Mrs. Dolor looked concerned. 

    “Two men burst into his room tonight. They fought Aaron and stole Herbert. Mom, please!”

    Mrs. Dolor looked past Marian at Aaron. He was nodding his head and successfully kept from crying. 

    “Marian,” she said and shook her head, “that’s just not true. I saw both of them tonight. They are fine. But they are making little sense like you.”

    “What?” Marian let go of her mother. In her mother’s glazed eyes, a distant expression stole her hope. Her mother’s drunken stare was incapable of comprehension. It made her knees weak, and she drooped to the ground. 

    “Just like I told them—” Mrs. Dolor smiled. “Nothing is wrong. We just need to all go back to sleep.” 

    “I don’t want to sleep, Mom!” Marian shouted, and tears streamed down her cheeks. “I want to find them and get out of here!” She glanced at Aaron next to her. He stood in front of the cracked closet. She thought she heard a noise like a sneeze from the closet. Aaron didn’t seem to notice. 

    “Marian,” Mrs. Dolor whispered, and Marian looked at her mother’s sorrowful eyes. “I want to believe you, baby. But I just—can’t.” Her hand went to her forehead, and she pouted. “Oh, this awful headache.”

    “Mom, are you okay?” Marian touched her shoulder. 

    “Oh!” Mrs. Dolor looked at Marian, shocked. “Marian, where did you come from?” Her mother looked at her as if waking up from a dream. “Honey, what are you doing here? It’s the middle of the night.”  

    “I don’t—” Marian was speechless.

    Aaron closed his eyes. “It’s my fault,” he said. “We shouldn’t have come.” He helped Marian to her feet, and they both realized that the song was keeping Mrs. Dolor from being able to help. They walked defeated to the door. 

    “Marian,” Aaron said. “Seeing your mother like this—Well, I think I heard a voice last night outside Herbert’s bedroom talking about us. And…I hated the thought of it then, but I think it was your dad. Now that I see your mom not making any sense—is it possible your dad is helping them?” 

    Marian stole a last glance at her mother, still staring at the vanity mirror, and shook her head. Aaron took the handle in his grip and closed the door behind them. 

    Just before it shut, Marian saw the closet door next to her mother swing open. Herbert, Esther, and a flash of orange and red fur jumped out. Her brother and sister were wearing different clothing, and Esther’s hair was down around her shoulders instead of up in pigtails. 

    “Oh, wait!” Marian shouted. 

    The door shut.

    “What?” Aaron exclaimed.

    “I saw them!” Marian grabbed Aaron’s hand. “I saw them, Aaron! Herbert and Esther!” Aaron reached for the door-handle and the gong’s chime rung. The handle shook in Aaron’s palm.


    Esther sunk into the big leather couch. The pillows enveloped her little body like a pincushion. Across from her, the Monster stood staring at the matches on the ground. 

    “I don’t think you’re an abomination,” she said. “But I think I understand what you mean about danger. Without any danger, I guess we couldn’t do anything really meaningful. Or fun. I do like roller-coasters.” 

    The Monster smirked and glanced at her. “I like flowers,” he whispered. “There aren’t any flowers where I come from.”  

    Esther watched the sad giant. She dug into her pigtail and pulled the Bur Marigold from it. She examined the yellow flower in her hand and pet its delicate petals. They were as pristine as the day it was plucked from the River Rinkling in the Enchanted Forest. 

    Esther crawled off the front of the couch and handed the flower to the Monster. The floorboards on the stairway creaked like someone was sneaking around the corner. She turned to see who was coming. 

    “It’s beautiful,” the Monster said, touching the petals and stamen. His hand quivered above it. “It’s the kind of flower that floats well.”

    Esther looked back at the Monster after no one came around the corner. She suddenly realized how safe she felt with him. Even the sound of creaks and groans in the shadows didn’t startle her as much as she had expected they would.

    “Like, an ugly old lake,” the Monster continued, “could be made beautiful if it just had something like this on it.” 

    “Well, that’s where I got it,” Esther smiled. “On a river. But it wasn’t ugly. It was lovely. The most wondrous river I’ve ever seen.” Esther smiled at the ground, remembering. “Maybe we can go there sometime.” 

    Tap. Tap. Tap. 

    Esther glanced back at the stairway when she heard tapping and a commotion like flapping wings coming from the hallway next to her parent’s bedroom. The raven zoomed by the living-room and up the stairs.

    Esther looked back at the Monster, but he was frowning. He crushed the flower in his enormous hand. “No,” he said. “There’s no such thing as beautiful places anymore.”

    Esther looked at the squashed flower in the Monster’s fist. Her chest shuddered at the sight of it. She wiped a tear from her face and took a deep breath. “Why did you do that?”


  • Twenty-Twenty-Two Nuggets


    It has been a joy to write in this format this season, and I only hope this routine will grow and blossom further in coming years. But this year has not been without pain and tragedy. As many know, and most misunderstand, it held its fair share of heartbreak and sacrifice. My wife and I have discovered that some of whom we thought to be our friends, brothers, and sisters were a collective of sycophants and malcontents. We also discovered those who truly love us, pastor us, and whom we may have overlooked in our own selfish ambitions. And still further, we discovered just how blind people tend to be in a world of distractions.

    Pride has been wrought from my soul, dangled in my face, and shown me how disgusting of a demon it really is. It held its wings wide across my face and smeared its feces down my chest. Humbled and humiliated, I wept when I understood how foolishly prideful I had been for years, blind to the beauty and wisdom of some I may have overlooked. And that pride—that very demon’s ugly face—smiled and hugged through the faces and arms of others that I thought I could stand beside for a lifetime. Of course, I’m being dramatic—as Josh Ellis would comment. But I think perhaps I’m not dramatic enough. Isn’t this pride and insecurity the destruction of us all?

    Nonetheless, the year has been finished with just as much beauty as its disgust. While I lost many friends, influence, tradition, routine, and community, my family also acquired the depths of something I believe to be far grander. We found each other! We wrapped our arms round one another and held each other tighter than ever before. My wife and I dreamed again and realized how miserable and despondent we truly had been. Our dreams had been left on the shore, flopping and suffocating, waiting for some fisherman to stab through the heart and finally finish us off. But now they are blooming and carrying our hearts. Joy and Hope stand at the door in anticipatory grace. And now we laugh far more than cry. Though the sacrifice of community is abhorrently devastating. We yearn for people again, like never before, and our next step will involve people at a greater volume than that before.

    I know I oft speak in riddles in these texts, and that is because I require the cathartic experience, but also the honor in my soul that would not betray, speak idly or ill of a brother or sister, and would aim to improve the future.

    However, I can say that honor is something that ruins my soul; it is so strong in my heart. One of the grandest pleasures in my life is honoring an individual and celebrating both their life and legacy. To see my family so ridiculed not by words, but by the lack of them—the mere absent attention and a flippant waving of the hand—butchers my heart with a dull steak knife. How I wish I could remove that knife from one of our backs and stick someone else with it! But I know that my honor is in heaven when I see Jesus face-to-face. And all that we did was never for men’s honor anyway, but for the Lord’s.

    Twenty-Twenty-Two is nearly closed. And my thirty-fifth year just past. On my phone, I have a collection of writings that I muse throughout my yearly patterns. When a new thought, proverb, story, or dream pops in my head, I jot it down and hope to bring it to light one day. Sometimes they turn into stories, other times sermons or poetry. But because the year is closing, I thought it à propos to spit out the collection of them in a format that someone can appreciate. If nothing more, they will be a reminder to myself of what the year meant. Some of them have been repeated or altered in other writings, but the whole of them were written “as is” throughout the months prior. They are what Bryan Moore and I simply call: Nuggets.




    There is this thought that we will achieve our dreams once we have money to obtain them. But I believe we will achieve our dreams once we realize money cannot obtain them. Our dreams are found in the heart of our souls where money has no access. So why do we keep chasing after more money when we should be chasing after more meaning?


    At any moment, a man can be proud of himself, and the next ashamed of his pride, and the next, too proud to ask for help.  


    What is fame? What is glory? What is walking around hoping to expand and become something great? Are not these things simply fool’s errands for a dream born of greed and status? How far does my heart chase after growth before it becomes barren? How long do I assume and second-guess motives before I am a tyrant?


    We beg for miracles. But they are at the bottom of the earth. Right before death, on the edge of Hell. And sometimes beyond it. There is where the miracle lies. We have to be ready for the hard life if we want miracles in it. 


    If I would understand all the “good” moments in life are because of Him, and all the “bad” moments are a product of faith’s necessary struggle, I wouldn’t be so eager to hold them up as a reflection of my worth. Instead, I would hold them up as what they are—promises kept by God and promises in the making.


    The hardest parts of leadership are seeing the people you love most fail or quit. Even harder still is sacrificing the people you love most because it’s what’s best. Even hardest is sacrificing yourself. Most people are afraid to confront these, and that is why they do not lead well. 


    On leadership: if you only give public praise and private correction, the people following you will fear privacy with you and distrust your public praise. You must praise in public and even more in private. Let the private person always be the more intimate person. Relationship and followers thrive on intimacy and vulnerability. 


    On the way to the Mount of Olives, Jesus, Peter, James, and John sang a hymn. (Matthew 26:30) 


    My purpose is not determined by my hundred years on this planet. Such a small life can not weigh or sum it. Instead, regardless of what I accomplish or briefly see on earth, I have a purpose and design made for eternity. I cannot begin to fathom what purpose such a life will entail, and likewise, I cannot believe that someone’s life on earth will be lengthened or shortened because of a greater or lesser calling here or there. 


  • The Endless Night


    The Endless Night

    Chapter 6

    Marian watched her sister walk into the windswept grass of a dark field. “It happened again,” she whispered, anxious and perplexed. “Get back here, Esther!” 

    Marian reached for the door, but it jerked away from her hand. Five bony fingers wrapped around its edge and slammed the door shut. Marian grabbed the handle and Aaron rammed his body against the door. Someone was holding it shut on the other side.

    “Esther!” They shouted. They pounded on the door and tugged the golden handle. Finally, the grip on the other side loosened. The door gave way. 

    It led to a dank hallway similar to the one leading into the parlor. Above their heads, a fluorescent light flickered on and off, jittering as if it had an upset stomach. Spiderwebs and their hosts lined the long perimeter of the dark walls. Centipedes, roaches and scorpions sprawled across the floor and collectively scurried for the open door when they detected the new light. Aaron slammed the door shut. 

    “I hate bugs,” he gasped. 

    “Where is she?” Marian dropped to her knees with her head in her hands and cried.

    Aaron looked up and down the hall for any sign of enemies. Appeased, he dropped next to Marian and put his hand on her shoulder. 


    “Who are you?” Esther asked. The dark, menacing figure refused to move or say a word. “I’m Esther.” The table stood between her and the Monster. She took a step toward the front door, but the Monster stepped with her. His torso twisted to turn his arms, and he moaned as he moved. She stepped back the other way, and his body twisted and took a step toward her. 

    Esther licked her lips and furrowed her brow. “Are you going to hurt me?”

    The Monster stared from his deep, dark eyes. His expressionless face confused her. Nothing stirred but the crackle of the fire in the nearby living-room. Esther looked up and down the dozens of scars on the Monster’s arms and hands; deep grooves that left holes and revealed dry bones underneath the skin. 

    “Do those hurt?” Esther asked. 

    The Monster turned his body on his heels and stomped into the other room. Curious, Esther followed. The Monster avoided the fire with a wide berth and approached the front door. He turned to meet her eyes. Then, he lifted his mighty hand and pounded his palm into the center of the door three times. He reached down for the round handle and turned it. On the other side of the threshold, Esther saw the Dolor’s living room. 

    She was drawn toward it like an insect to a bug zapper, her eyes wide and mouth open. She stood just before the entrance, next to the towering Monster, and looked up at him.

    “Who are you?” She asked.

    His gaze dropped from the entry to her pure, delicate face. She stood no higher than his waist. “A monster made by a scientist with too much power,” the Monster replied. She had been hoping he could speak, but was surprised nonetheless when the sound came from his deformed throat. The voice sounded like rusty bolts tumbling over sand and gravel. “—and not enough sense.” 

    “How did you get the door to open to my house?” Esther stared through the passage at her living-room. She imagined the door stood in front of the fireplace below the television. The coffee table and couch rested in front of her in the darkness. Behind them, the kitchen light lit the empty dining-room. 

    “The Pendulum has slowed,” the Monster said. “—and Time with it. We stand between a moment and a minute.” He looked up at the Dolor living-room and raised his hand into the air, pointing. “And when time slows, many doors will lead to and fro.” 

    Esther furrowed her brow. She looked back at the clock on top of the witch’s mantle, next to all the pictures of children’s faces. “Are you saying that Time stopped?”

    “If Time stopped, none would exist,” the Monster growled. “No. It is merely frozen. In this place and that. And the night will not end until the Pendulum resumes.”  

    “I need to find my brother,” Esther gazed into the Monster’s black eyes.

    “I know,” he replied. 

    Esther took the Monster’s hand, and the two stepped over the threshold into the living-room. 


    “Help me!” 

    Herbert’s throat was weak, his voice pale and strung out, the esophagus split open and bleeding from the screams. His mouth dried up; he gagged, and his body trembled. He squeezed his eyes, but they were too empty to produce any more tears. Overhead, the Pendulum swung up the opposite direction in stuttering, stop-motion tempo. Outside, the lightning flashed without a sound. Herbert watched the disc float and wondered what passing out was like. His head nodded back and forth against his shoulders. The blood rushed to his feet and his eyes rolled in their sockets. He imagined he was on top of a wide building, crammed between massive structures of gray concrete. They towered over him, and he felt his insides churn. He leaned forward and threw up on his lap. 

    “Please,” he whimpered. 

    Something stirred in the shadows. The sound quickened his heart. He searched the darkness, reaching his squinted eyes out as far as they could go, wishing his glasses hadn’t fallen from his face. The moonlight cast a beam through the eastern window and Herbert saw a long, wispy tail slide through the air. 

    He clenched his jaw and shouted at the darkness, trying to sound menacing, but his voice came out frail and barely as intimidating as a house cat. Nails scratched against the wood floor in the shadows. Thud! A sound like an axe nailing into the wooden beam. Chattering teeth. A low growl. Slopping liquid splashing on the floor. 

    Herbert shook in his binds like a madman and felt the rope loosen. A surge of adrenaline raced up his spine. The hope was almost unbearable, and the dread made him slur and mumble nonsense. 

    Lightning blinked, and for just a brief moment, he saw the thing in the darkness. At first, he mistook it for a dog, but it hunched on its hind legs like a chimpanzee. On its back were long quills, standing on end and swaying against one another like an anemone. Its left leg had four sharp nails scratching at the wood. On its right leg, a sole talon, twice as long as the others, dug into the wood. Drool, like oil, dripped from its pig face and razor teeth. 

    It took a step toward him, and the flash of light disappeared. Herbert screamed as loud as possible. 


    “Did you hear that?” Aaron lifted his head up from Marian’s side. He looked down the hall at nothing. 

    Marian wiped away a tear. “What?” 

    A faint scream echoed down through the house.

    “Herbert,” Aaron shouted. 

    The children jumped to their feet and raced to the stairway. 


    Esther and the Monster stepped into the living-room, and Esther heard the piano’s music once again. The Monster closed the door behind them and it evaporated to dust, just as it had in front of the witch in the grassy field. The Dolor’s fireplace remained where it once was and for a second Esther imagined Santa Claus getting into houses the same way. 

    She gazed around the room. It was dark and still. The dishes from her dinner with her siblings and Aaron were still on the coffee table in front of her. Mom never cleaned them up after the first song played. She looked at the dining-room table, lit under the amber glow of the kitchen. She shook her head and sighed. 

    “I miss my family,” she whimpered. “Who knows where they could be by now?” 

    The Monster plodded to Mr. Dolor’s reclining chair. He dropped his legs from under him, without bending at the knees, and lowered down to it. He moaned as he leaned into the back of the chair.

    “Time hasn’t moved since you left them, Esther,” the Monster growled. “I suspect your sister and friend are waiting for you outside the door you disappeared through.”

    Esther wiped her eyes. “What?”

    “I told you.” The Monster looked at her. “Time is frozen in your home.”

    “Well, c’mon then!” Esther shouted. “We need to go to them! Why are you sitting down?” 

    “I’m just resting. Waiting for new life.” The Monster closed his eyes.

    “Help me!” Herbert’s faint scream echoed through the house.

    “Herbert!” Esther stuttered toward the dining-room. 

    The Monster leaped from his chair and snatched her waist with his mighty hand. “You can’t help him, Esther!”

    “Why?” Esther fought against his arms, and he let her go. She looked up at the Monster like a juror, angry and despondent.

    Tap. Tap. Tap.

    She spun round and found a raven perched on top of the wooden cupboard between her and the front door. It stared at her as if learning and remembering; its long black feathers shimmered in blueish hue against the incandescent lights. It rapped its beak against the wood three more times—tap, tap, tap—and flapped its broad wings into the air, before taking off and swooping upstairs. Esther watched it disappear, and a chill raced down her spine. 

    “That’s the raven,” the Monster said. “The Professor’s spy.” 


    Around and around the steps, Aaron and Marian raced. Their hands slid along the top of the railings and squeezed the caps on each turn. Second floor, third floor, fourth floor… How many stories were there? Where did they come from? They continued chasing steps up and around, wondering how many more would come, listening for the cry of Herbert. 

    Like a torpedo, a black raven bolted up the stairway between them and knocked them to the ground. It banked on a dime and flew down the hallway just above. 

    “What was that?” Aaron yelled. 

    “Keep going!” Marian hollered. “Just hang on, Herbert! We’re coming!”


    Herbert heard his sister’s voice through the floorboards. Oh my God, thank You! He couldn’t see the creature in the attic, but knew it was somewhere. He screamed Marian’s name and pulled his hands against the binds, looking and waiting for the creature to pounce. Sweat dripped down his forehead; the salt stung his blurry eyes.

    Lightning flashed. His neck jerked around like a bobble-head; his eyes traveling along the empty floorboards and up the walls and ceiling. In the rafters, next to the swinging Pendulum, the creature’s tail swayed. Two red eyes glowed at him like a cat. He screamed and wrenched his body against the ropes. The chair wobbled and lurched forward. Herbert yelped as his body hit the ground and the chair lay on top of him. 


    “Hang on, Herbert!” Marian yelled. “We hear you!” 

    Her hand squeaked along the railing and squeezed another cap. Her body spun and came onto the last set of stairs. She raced up the fifth step and her head banged into the ceiling. Aaron rushed beside her and put his hands up against the wooden slats. He groped around the boards and cracks for an opening. 

    “Herbert?” He hollered into the boards. 

    On the other side, Herbert felt the vibrations of Aaron’s shuffling hands and heard his voice. 

    “I’m here!” He yelled back. 

    “Oh, thank God, we found you!” Marian shouted through the ceiling. “Where are you? How do we get to you?” 

    “Through the door!” Herbert pulled at his binds. The ropes felt looser now that the chair lay on his back. 

    “What door, Herbert?” Marian shouted and Aaron searched. “There’s nothing here!” 

    Herbert pulled a hand free. He ripped at the rope like a lunatic. “It’s right in front of you!” He yelled. “Please—hurry!—there’s something in here!” 

    Herbert looked over his shoulder as the last bond fell off. The lightning flashed. The creature dropped from the rafters. Thud! Its nails dug into the floorboards and it opened its mouth to growl. Drool and greasy oil dripped down its pig jowls. 

    Herbert screamed and clawed at the chair. He got it free from his back and lurched himself forward on the floor to the attic door. His hands fumbled at the latch. The creature took a step forward and raised its single claw into the air. Herbert’s shaking hands jammed the hook open. He sprung to his knees and yanked up the door. The creature swiped. He fell through the opening. A claw scraped open his back. The door slapped shut. 


  • An Unexpected Ally


    An Unexpected Ally

    Chapter 5

    “What was that?” Aaron gawked. 

    He froze at the sound of the pendulum’s ring. After the chime evaporated, he stepped onto the wooden floorboard like a ninja crouching against the wall. He hovered for a moment in the middle of the hall, watching and waiting, listening and looking. Dust fluttered in the air, and the stench of mildew and urine filled his nostrils. To his left the hallway ran down to the kitchen, dining-room, and under the stairwell. He saw the dimly lit perimeter of Mr. and Mrs. Dolor’s bedroom door. A moment passed, and he thought of running to their door, bursting through, and pleading for help. But then he remembered their drunken, zombie faces from earlier that night, and the little goblin was somewhere hiding in the shadows. What would they say to them? What if they couldn’t get them to understand even now? 

    In front of him was the study. Behind the two French-cut doors, the piano played itself. Its black and white keys danced up and down, and the foot-pedals compressed as if a minstrel ghost played on it. The dreary song drudged through the doorway and into the house. 

    His hand motioned behind him to Marian. She crept from a shadow and mimicked his stealthy pose. Behind her, Esther tip-toed out and thought about her game of Spies and Assassins with Herbert. She felt like her life depended on her sneak-ability now. Aaron crept down the hall, but stopped and turned back when he realized the girls had halted in front of the study.

    “What are you doing?” His whisper shouted.

    The girls didn’t seem to notice. “If we stop the piano,” Esther whispered to Marian, “we can stop all of this.” 

    “You don’t know that,” Aaron pleaded.

    Esther reached for the curved golden door-handle. 

    “Wait!” Marian held out her hand. “We said we wouldn’t go through doors.”

    “But this is different,” Esther resisted. “The door is glass. We can see what’s on the other side.”

    “This isn’t what we said we were going to do.” Aaron was at their side. 

    “Aaron,” Marian reasoned, “she may be right. This could be done in a flash. Wouldn’t that be worth it?” She looked back to Esther. 

    “I’m going,” Esther turned the handle and pushed. A strange thing happened that changed the trajectory of Esther’s entire night. It was quite peculiar when she cracked the door open and saw, through the glass pane, the floor of the study, but between the door and its jamb, a field of grass blowing in the wind.

    The door swung open further and there was no denying it. Esther stepped through the doorway into a field lit by moonlight. Crickets sung, and the grass bowed in reverence to the wind. A dark forest loomed across the field nearby.

    “Wow,” Esther whispered, dumbfounded.

    “It happened again,” Marian said from the other side of the doorway. “Get back here, Esther!” 

    But before Esther turned, the door-handle jerked away from Marian and Aaron. Five bony fingers wrapped around its edge and slammed it shut. Esther jumped back and stumbled in the grass. She looked up at a haggardly old woman holding the door shut before it moaned and vanished in a puff of smoke. 

    “Oh, no!” Esther yelled. 

    “Oh, yes!” The old woman cheered. She wore a long purple nightgown and carried a lantern in one hand. Her unkempt hair draped down her shoulders. Warts and boils covered her face and elongated nose. “I’ve been waiting for a delightful young child to come along and help me. And you, young lady, are just the one I need.” 

    Esther stood to her feet and brushed the grass and specks of dirt from her nightgown. 

    “Excuse me, ma’am,” Esther said, “I’m sure you need help and all, but I need to get through that door again.”

    “And what door do you mean?” The old lady glanced around the empty field in the twilight. 

    “Well, the one that just disappeared.” 

    “Funny thing walking through doors that you had no intent to cross,” the old lady said, holding her lantern up to Esther’s face. “Why would a young lady like you walk out into this field like that, unless you meant to? Or did you mean to come here and catch me offs guard and robs me!” The woman’s hand pressed against her chest like she were a damsel in a play. 

    “No! Of course not!” Esther held her palms up. “I’m not trying to hurt you!” 

    Esther glanced all over the field for the door, but saw only grass and the shadows of trees. The moon hid its face behind a cloud and the forest grew dim. 

    “Well,” the old lady said. “I don’t see any way back. Do you?”

    Esther sighed. 

    “So unless you want to sleep in the grass and get eaten by a bear, you best come with me to my house. And I have plenty of delicious treats for you if you swear to help me with my chores. Come on!” 

    The old woman bent forward and shook on her legs. The lantern rattled in her shaky hand and she turned toward the forest. Her free hand held her nightgown up as she walked.

    Esther shook her head and grimaced in frustration. 

    “Won’t be long, child,” the old lady called. “My cottage is just on the other side of the tree-line. Wonderful that I met you on this side of the door just then. You may be out here all alone, if not for me.” 

    Esther rolled her eyes, murmured, “if it wasn’t for you, I’d be back home,” and followed the old woman. The two walked along an overgrown glen through the forest. The night was silent except for the lady’s lantern banging against its hinges and singing with the crickets. Its amber glow lit the path with the help of flying green lightning-bugs. 

    “Do you know how the doors work?” Esther asked. 

    “What’s that?” The old lady jerked her head toward Esther. 

    “A door in my house led me here,” Esther explained. “And then it disappeared.” 

    “I’ve seen too many things I don’t understand, and I’m not about to start learning them now.” 

    Esther sighed and followed the lantern’s light and the old lady’s silhouette against it. After half an hour of drudging through the dark forest, Esther’s tired eyes saw a stone cottage under the shadow of a maple tree. Six small lanterns lit its entryway with a golden, foggy light spreading through the chimney’s pluming smoke.

    “Home sweet home,” the old lady cheered and clapped her hand against the rattling lantern. She stumbled through the picket fence and up the stone path. 

    Esther smelled pumpkin pie and butterscotch in the air, and even amidst her frustration and forlorn circumstance, she felt delighted. “Mmm.” 

    “Oh, I told you I had treats.” The lady pressed her body against the front door and shoved it open. 

    Esther’s foot stepped over the threshold, and she paused. Her mother would be so disappointed in her entering a stranger’s house. But deep down, Esther knew she hadn’t any other choice in the matter. The old lady was right. Where else could she go in the middle of the night? She took a deep breath and brought her next foot over. 

    The cottage was quaint. White marble stone and red cedar lined the walls and ceiling. A fire lit the main living room and its flicker danced against the old lady’s bent shadow. She dispensed her lantern and put it on the mantle next to a collection of wooden frames. They displayed the portraits of many children. 

    “Are those your grandchildren?” Esther asked. 

    The woman turned and smiled at Esther. “I’ve got pie,” she said. “Would you like some?” 

    “I’m not very hungry, thank you,” Esther replied. “I was actually in the middle of sleeping only a little while ago. Before my brother was kidnapped. That’s why I need to hurry back. I need to find a door back to my home.”

    “No way to do that in the middle of the night, sweetie.” The lady smiled. She walked to her kitchen and opened the oven. With an oven mitt, she pulled a pumpkin pie from inside. “So you might as well enjoy some treats and rest.”

    Esther’s eyes wandered around the room. The light danced along the red cedar ceiling. She thought about visiting her grandmother’s log cabin in Inverness and killing caterpillars with Herbert. She giggled and then frowned.

    “I hate the idea of going back to sleep and waiting ’til morning,” she thought aloud. The old lady kept rummaging. “Where are you, Herbert? Where are you, Esther?” 

    Esther looked out the window and noticed the outline of a man standing against the picket fence, under the porch lantern’s glow. It surprised her and made her jump.

    “Oh! Who’s that man?” Esther asked. 

    The old lady didn’t look up from the pie she diced up. “Oh, don’t mind thatman,” she smiled. “He’s just visiting for a bit.” 

    Esther looked again. He wore a dark suit and stood as still as a tree, staring into the forest, with his back turned. On any other night, his shadowy silhouette would have been downright creepy and frightened her. But tonight, amid the lonesome, cold forest and sad, haggard fence, his presence made her sad. She thought he looked lonely. 

    “Oh!” The old lady hollered. 

    “What is it!” Esther ran to the kitchen. 

    “My wedding band!” The woman cried. “My wedding band fell off.”

    Esther rushed to the frantic old lady, stumbling over herself at the kitchen counter. 

    “Where—?”

    “It must have fallen into the oven!” The old lady pulled down the oven door and coughed at the heat. She backed up behind Esther and begged, “Please, sweetie, help me! I’m too feeble to look down there and see.”

    Esther bowed down in front of the oven and wondered if she should trust the strange old woman enough to have her back to her in this dark house. But before she could think twice about it, the old lady’s pale face changed color to a hideous dark blue and her teeth grew jagged and wicked. Her hand grabbed at Esther’s little forearm and she was very strong for an old lady.

    “Let go of me!” Esther shouted. She looked into the old lady’s eyes. They grew dim and demonic, and she realized the lady wasn’t a sweet old woman waiting to give treats to young children. She was a witch waiting to cook them in her stew. 

    “Why not have a look in that oven, little girl!” The woman shrieked and pushed Esther onto the ground in front of the oven. Her spindly hands wrapped around Esther’s shoulders and pulled her up. The edges of the hot iron singed Esther’s pigtails, and the witch cackled wildly. 

    Just then, the front door to the cottage flung open and slammed into the wall next to it. Two heavy steps pounded into the cottage and the floorboards shook. The witch let go of Esther and shrieked in horror. Esther dropped back to the floor and scurried away from the over and under the dining-room table. 

    “You’re not supposed to do this!” The witch screamed. 

    Esther listened to the scuffle, trying to keep her head down, and praying she could disappear and be back with her parents and siblings. The old hag shrieked again, this time in pain. Esther glanced from under the table and saw the witch lifted into the air by two powerful arms. The arms flung her across the kitchen and her little, wrinkly, old arms flailed into the air, crashing into a row of hanging pots and pans. Her body landed on the kitchen counter and flopped to the ground. Then the bulky man gripped her squirming and floundering body in his arms and tossed her into the open oven and kicked it shut. Esther covered her ears at the shrill howl and agony of the witch burning alive. An image of the hag’s face pressed up against the wrought iron vent, bald and melting away, replayed in Esther’s nightmares for years to come. 

    Esther cowered under the table, shaking and praying that the man hadn’t seen her. But then his heavy feet stepped toward her and stopped in front of the table. He wasn’t moving or saying a word, but of course he knew she was hiding under there.

    Esther slunk back and came from under the table on the far side. She looked up to see the man in the moonlight. He was tall, stiff, and wore a black suit jacket that was too small to cover his arms and dirty clothing. He had deep-set eyes and a long scar down his forehead, nose, and cheek. Two metal nodes jut out from each side of his neck from where his creator, a maniacal doctor, brought him to life using lightning and the parts of dead men. 

    “Frankenstein,” Esther whispered.


  • Watch the World Burn


    The plume of tar, chemical paint, cotton, wood, and ash filled my lungs. I gasped for air, but it was a good kind of gasp. It would be in memoriam of the final wave of disgust and pain—and it filled me one last time. I was inhaling, taking it in. Letting it fill and consume me. It drifted in and out of my ears, nostrils, eyelids, and mouth. Glued itself to the pores on my hands and neck. Covered me like a venomous blanket and hugged me tight in bitterness and misery. But then the wind took it away and the puff of smoke was gone. All that remained were the burning embers and dried up ashes. 


    My father, in a sense, was born to be a pastor. Though, the title itself means nothing—or should mean nothing—in the grand scheme of God’s creation. But for the sake of this re-telling: he was born to be a pastor. His great-grandfather was a pastor. His grandfather was a pastor. His father was a pastor. But he didn’t become one until he was nearly sixty. 

    Instead, he worked hard to be the best dad of three he could. He strived to win financially. And ultimately sacrificed his marriage on the altar of “success”. He had a relative mansion, a great job, and worked his whole life to get to that moment, only to see his marriage fall to pieces. And then he was taking his 13-year-old son to Titusville to start over again.

    I remember one evening or another, we were in the kitchen together, making one of three meals we always ate (frozen pizza, spaghetti, or “beanie-weenies”). Suddenly, and for no apparent reason, he gasped for air, clutched me in his arms and began weeping all over my shoulder. His tears drenched my shirt, and I felt cold, wet, and terrified. In my whole life, I’ve never been so scared of my father. 

    He eventually let go of me, wiped his tears, apologized and walked to his room to collect himself. As a 35-year-old man, I understand now a piece of what he felt. 

    He could have squandered or become a helpless blob of a man. He could have given up in dismay. Instead, he put his head down between his shoulders and searched for what needed to change in himself. It wasn’t easy, and it wasn’t quick. But he knew he had to leave behind the way he had done things before, to go where he needed to be. 

    Sometimes life is all about change. And mistakes propelling us forward into places we have to fix. 

    Sometimes life isn’t just a turn from wrong to right at all. Or from evil to good. It is simply a turn from the life we have to the one we are offered. 

    In the nineteenth chapter of First Kings, Elijah sought out Elisha, who was working in a field on the last and final team of twelve oxen-plowing teams. Elijah went to him and threw his cloak across his shoulders before leaving him stupefied and alone. Elisha runs to him after realizing what Elijah’s intent is and hollers, “First let me go and kiss my father and mother goodbye, and then I will go with you!”

    Elijah turns to him and says, “Go on back, but think about what I have done to you.” 

    Elisha is in the midst of great change, opportunity, and destiny. He does not hesitate again. He returns to his oxen and slaughters them there and then. He destroys his plow and sets it on fire to roast the meat. He gives all the meat away to the townspeople and then follows Elijah. 

    Elijah never tells Elisha what is happening or what will happen. He simply puts the future on his shoulders and sees what kind of man Elisha is. 

    No one can tell you your future. Just as no one can steal your destiny. It belongs to you. You just have to go out and get it. You have to decide what future you want—what future you will pursue—what future you must create.

    You have to decide what you are willing to burn so that you cannot return.

    This was never about turning from wrong to right. Or evil to good. It was simply turning from the life Elisha had to the one he was offered. And his radical behavior made it a declaration that there is no going back.

    In his Gospel, John Luke describes a moment when Jesus was promised by someone that they would “follow [Him] wherever [He] goes.” But Jesus replies, “Foxes have dens to live in, and birds have nests, but the Son of Man has no place even to lay his head.” Jesus turns to someone else and says, “Come, follow me.” The man agrees to, but informs Jesus that he must first return home and bury his father. Jesus instructs, “Let the dead bury their own dead! Your duty is to go and preach about the Kingdom of God.” Another turns to Jesus and says, “Lord, I will follow you, but first let me say goodbye to my family.” But Jesus tells him, “Anyone who puts a hand to the plow and then looks back is not fit for the Kingdom of God.”

    You cannot follow Jesus into the future if you are holding on to your past. 

    We all want peaceful, joyful, fulfilled, miraculous, legacy-leaving, history-making, dead-raising, powerful, prophetic lives used by God. But are we willing to give up every last addiction, adultery, gossip, manipulation, passive-aggression, whining, partying, indulgent, prideful, foolish vice we have hidden under the bed?

    “I really enjoy being the center of attention, God. With my instant satisfaction, easy, quick results, lifestyle. Make sure that’s part of the plan, too, please.” 


    Much of our adult lives involve us living out what others want us to be. Rather than who we are supposed to be. There is a difference, of course, between setting the past on fire and burning bridges. God’s Word tells us to be at peace with all men, if at all possible. So your past-burning isn’t about destroying relationships. Burning bridges is about setting other people on fire. Burning your past is about removing the things that should not be taken into your future. 

    There are people in my past, both friends and family, that I had to remove myself from, not because I wanted to “get back at them” or bitterly remove them from my life. But only because they wouldn’t let me grow into who God intended me to be. 

    And I have to ask myself this all the time: “Am I still growing? What is holding me back?”

    The beautiful and magnificent part of God’s personality is that ofttimes He uses the pieces of our past—both good and bad—to enrich our future. So don’t use Elisha’s plow-burning as an excuse to burn all your bridges. Burn the past that is holding you back, not the people who don’t know any better. Instead, give whatever last fruit or cooked meat you have to the townspeople and go.


    My dad had to burn his past that was selfish and sinful when we were in that apartment crying. 

    Later, he would burn his position at ULA to walk into what God intended for him. And I’m confident he still has more to burn.

    There is something powerful, elemental, and cathartic about fire. 

    I had a girlfriend in my late adolescent years. I thought she and I would marry. We dated for nearly two and a half years. But nearly every aspect of our relationship was unhealthy. And I don’t mean sexually unhealthy, but the plague and toxicity that lives deeper than that. (Though don’t be disillusioned to think sexual sin isn’t enough to ruin.) The things like manipulation, guilt, lying and pettiness that really destroy a soul. We weren’t pushing toward God anymore. She was an artist slipping away from Him every day. Until finally we broke up. And in my misery, I found the beautiful and enriching act of setting all the paintings she had given me on fire.

    Of course, this wasn’t about hurting her. I never told anyone except my wife I did it—until now, I suppose. But it was about me setting my past on fire and making sure I couldn’t go back. 

    There’s no going back after fire-moments. They take you all-in. 

    I was not supposed to be the man that she wanted me to be.

    When Elisha lit his belongings on fire, he was telling God, “I will never turn back from the calling you have placed on my life.”

    If nothing else, fire-moments set you free from all the things that keep holding you down.

    Those burning paintings were a metaphor. A manifested response to the pain inside. But it only begins there. We must set bitterness on fire; light it up with forgiveness and watch it burn.

    Set pain on fire.
    Set betrayal on fire.
    Set disappointment on fire.
    Set regret on fire.
    Set failure on fire.
    Cut them up into little pieces and douse them in kerosene. Throw the match and watch it burn. 


    Drop a few hundred years behind Elisha, and we see the prophet Jeremiah. He is a joke to his people, frustrated and completely misunderstood. At the end of his rope, he loses control and yells at his God, screaming and writhing in agony. This, too, I have experienced as of late. 

    O Lord, you misled me,
    and I allowed myself to be misled.
    You are stronger than I am,
        and you overpowered me.
    Now I am mocked every day;
       everyone laughs at me.
    When I speak, the words burst out.
        “Violence and destruction!” I shout.
    So these messages from the Lord
        have made me a household joke.
    But if I say I’ll never mention the Lord
        or speak in his name,
    his word burns in my heart like a fire.
        It’s like a fire in my bones!
    I am worn out trying to hold it in!
        I can’t do it!
    (Jeremiah 20:7-9)

    Nothing would make me gladder sometimes than to give up. But I know that is not the man I am. God has put a word in me, and I cannot stop. 

    That’s what sets men and women apart from others. The ones who refuse to give up. Those who say, “I cannot give up. It’s not in me.”

    There is a fire that will burn bright and light your path. It will bring warmth to your soul, light to your path and strength to your spirit and to your future. But in order to have it, you must set your past on fire. 


    (The writer would be remiss if he did not declare that Erwin McManus had much influence on this message and that all should take part in the wonders of his book “The Last Arrow”.)


  • An Unfamiliar House


    An Unfamiliar House

    Chapter 4

    The piano’s song reverberated throughout the house, and the air tasted stale like old, crusty bread. Aaron laid on his back and his face felt two distinct sensations: One was the icy sting of blood sliding down his forehead, and the other was someone patting his face. 

    “Aaron,” Marian whispered. “Aaron, wake up.” 

    He opened his eyes. He made out the small, round shapes of Marian and Esther hovering over him. It was still dark outside. Rain was pattering against the glass and thunder babbled far away. Aaron moaned, rolled over, and reached for his head. 

    “What happened to you, Aaron? Where is Herbert?” Marian failed to keep her voice steady. 

    “Oh, God—” Aaron stammered as he remembered what happened. “They took him!” He wailed.

    “What?” Marian shouted.

    “Who?” Esther asked. 

    “I don’t—I don’t know!” He sat up, the blood rushed from his head, and he fell back to the ground. “Two people came into the room. I fought them—I tried, but—oh, God, they kidnapped Herbert!” 

    “Who were they?” Esther asked.

    “I don’t know,” Aaron replied and shut his eyes. “It was all confusing. We heard lots of sounds outside the door. Tapping. Then voices. I think one was the Professor. And two others. One sounded old. The other—” Aaron hesitated. “Sounded like your dad.” 

    The girls glanced back and forth.

    “And then what?” Esther asked.

    “Some more tapping. And then two people. In the room. And then—then Herbert was gone.” 

    “How could—” Marian shouted. “You were supposed to—Why didn’t you help him?”

    Esther touched Marian’s shoulder. 

    Marian took a breath. “Are you okay, Aaron?” She asked. 

    “It doesn’t matter.” Aaron fought to his feet. “How did you guys know we were in trouble?”

    “We heard screaming,” Esther replied. “When we came upstairs, the door was open, and you were lying here, knocked out.”

    “We need to find Herbert and rescue him.” 

    The girls helped Aaron balance a few steps forward until he was confident on his own. They tiptoed out the open door and peered down into the stairway. Their heads lifted and their noses sniffed the air. It smelled like mildew and wet furniture. 

    “What’s that smell?” Aaron asked.

    Esther and Marian glanced at one another. 

    “We don’t know,” Marian said.

    “Something’s wrong,” Esther said. “The song is back—”

    “And that smell,” Marian added. “It’s like—it’s not our house.”

    The children closed Herbert’s door behind them. The music diminished like a pianist had pressed the dampener on a piano. Tip-toeing down the flight of stairs, the children came to the second floor. To their left, an amber glow bounced at the end of the hall from a defective ceiling light. Its flicker illuminated the faces of many unfamiliar doors. Dust covered each of them, and specks of dust fluttered in the air like little insects. The floorboards creaked underneath each step, and the children felt the uncomfortable sensation even more that their house no longer belonged to them. 

    Tap. Tap. Tap. 

    The children spun around at the sound, but saw only darkness. Then, they heard a flapping, like a bird’s wings. 

    “Marian?” Esther whispered. “What’s going on?” 

    Marian didn’t reply, but she too was curious to find out. She approached the first door on the right, just past the stairs leading down, and turned the handle. It creaked opened and screeched across a tile floor. Marian reached her hand into the darkness and felt a switch on the inside of the wall. She flicked it on. 

    Crammed and awkwardly—for all three were eager to see what was inside—the children pushed through, and were amazed to find themselves in a vast parlor, lined from floor to ceiling in subway tiles and white brick. Doors lined the sides of it as well, and nearest them, one was cracked open from someone previously leaving the room. A strange noise, like scraping and dragging, drew their curiosity deeper into the room, and, erroneously, Marian let the door slip away from her. It clipped shut. 

    A grand chandelier hung in the center of the parlor, and beneath it, an empty swimming pool. Ropes and ladders draped the sides of the pool to help anyone exit it. 

    “You guys have a pool inside your house?” Aaron gasped. 

     “No,” Esther said.

    “This isn’t ours,” Marian explained. “This isn’t our house.” 

    A loud thud echoed through the parlor. It sounded as though something fell inside of the pool. They heard a horrible sound, like something massive and grotesque crawling along the bottom, just out of view. It scraped along, and the sound bounced everywhere in the pool room. 

    “What is it?” Esther whispered. 

    The children stepped forward and leaned against an iron railing overlooking the pool. A hideous blob of blood, intestines, and bone crawled on the bottom. Its body pulsated yellow fat bubbles to the surface of its disgusting body. Each bubble popped and sprayed a yellow substance that made the air smell like mildew. On its flesh, where the boil exploded, an eyeball rolled over and opened. There were hundreds of eyes on its body and each of them scanned the room, until they stared at the three children leaning against the railing. A bony mouth opened from the center of the eyes, and a loud screech deafened the children’s ears and curdled their blood. It sounded like that of a forest banshee screaming in pain. 

    Wasting not another moment, the children raced back down the hall. Aaron slipped on the slick tile flooring and stumbled sideways against the door left ajar by someone else. He grabbed at the handle to steady himself, and before the others could realize it wasn’t the door they entered through, the group tumbled inside, slamming it shut behind them.

    Esther shrieked, and Aaron spun around. They weren’t in the hall anymore, and the surprise of standing on concrete in the shadows frightened Esther. 

    “What was that thing?” Esther shouted.

    “I don’t know.” Marian huffed and puffed and flicked on a nearby light switch.

    “Where are we, now?” Aaron gasped and looked at a room full of tools, trashcans, and an automobile in the center.

    “The garage,” Marian answered, and noticed the sound of music was louder.

    “How did we end up here?” Esther asked. 

    “Did we go through the same door?” Marian looked at Aaron.

    “What is happening?”

    “Are we dreaming?” 

    Aaron squeezed Marian’s arm. 

    “Ouch!” She slapped him. 

    “Well, that hurt,” Aaron said. “So we aren’t dreaming.” He looked around the garage at the tools and fishing gear hanging on the walls. “Is this your house?” 

    “That’s Dad’s car,” she said. “But I don’t know what that last room was, or that thing inside of the pool.” 

    “Did the Professor do this?” Esther thought aloud. 

    The patter of footsteps hushed them. They huddled together, and Aaron put his arms around the girls behind him. From beneath the automobile, a wily goblin crawled out of the darkness and peered around the hood. Its eyes were yellow, and its forehead was misshapen and slimy. 

    “Dolors,” it whispered, and Aaron looked at the girls. “But not the Dolor that matters,” it giggled. It scattered forward on four legs. 

    Not wanting to go back through the door into the room with the thing-in-the-pool, Aaron backed himself and the girls into the corner. He scanned the nearby wall for a tool to use as a weapon, trying to keep one eye on the creature. But the goblin ran opposite them for the doorway. He quickly tapped on and opened it; the children saw that it no longer led to the parlor. 

    Before leaving, the goblin turned back to the children cowering in the corner. “Stay put, maggots,” he threatened. “And the night might not take too long.” The creature squeezed through the opening and left without closing it. 

    “Marian,” Esther whimpered. 

    “Dolors,” Aaron said. “I don’t think this is your house anymore.” 

    “The Professor said he was bringing others,” Marian whispered to herself. “Somehow, he did this.” 

    The children huddled in silence and closed their eyes. Aaron hoped he would wake up in his own bed. Marian furrowed her brow, trying to imagine what her mother would do. Esther wished her dad’s arms were around her. 

    “What’s that thing your mom always does before bedtime?” Aaron asked.

    “Pray?” Esther offered.

    “I think it’s about time you did that again,” he said. 

    The children held each other’s hands, and Marian prayed for God to give them courage and His protection. In the silence, Aaron lifted his chin and listened to a low hum floating through the vents into the garage.

    “It’s the music,” he said, after Marian finished. “It’s doing something to your home. Like a spell. You saw how it messed with your Mom and Dad. It must be doing this, too.” 

    “Why isn’t it affecting us, then?” Esther asked. “Like them.”

    “The Fountain,” Marian exclaimed. “The Ghost of Ponce de León said it protected against spells and sounds.” 

    “Wasn’t a letdown, after all,” Aaron muttered.

    “And it’s affecting the doors,” Marian continued. “Each doorway goes to a hidden location. We can’t go through any doors unless absolutely necessary. Who know’s where we’ll end up?” 

    “Well, that thing left the garage door open,” Aaron said. 

    “We gotta find Herbert and get outta here,” Esther urged. 

    “If we leave, we may never get back,” Marian replied. “What about Mom and Dad?”

    “We get all of ‘em,” Aaron declared. “And we get out. And never come back.” 

    The music hummed inside, and the storm railed outside. Lightning flashed, but no thunder followed. It lit the tiny room up for only a moment. Wood slats and cobwebs lined the walls and ceiling. The only way in or out was a small fiberglass door laying on the floor. An enormous, yet thin and delicate, disk hung at the center of the room, cocked slightly upward, as if it were the pendulum of a massive grandfather clock, that waltzed too mightily, before breaking rhythm and freezing in an upward swing, out of sync. Underneath it, a single chair rested with a small boy asleep on it, lit by the dim moonlight.

    Herbert lifted his head and looked round the dark room. He felt lightheaded, and his eyes refused to focus. His heart raced when he tugged on his hands and realized rope held them to the back of the chair. Then he remembered what had happened. He screamed for help. And then his father’s name, and Aaron, his mother, and then Marian and Esther. No one replied. 

    Two windows framed the small room on each side of him. He looked out each and watched the rain patter against the glass. The flash of lightning sprayed a checker print shadow across his face and the room. Across from him, he saw the silhouette of a tall man with a top-hat and cane. He shouted and screamed. The lightning disappeared, and he saw only darkness across from him. 

    “Mr. Dauer?” Herbert whispered. 

    There was no reply. Herbert clenched his jaw and closed his eyes. He took a deep breath and tried to defog his glasses. Tears dripped off his cheeks. 

    Beneath the fiberglass door, a latch slid and unhinged. The door creaked open and Professor Ludwig Wolfgang entered the attic. 

    “Herbert,” he said. 

    “Let me go!” Herbert shouted, hoping someone would hear from beyond the open doorway.

    “No one is listening, Herbert,” the Professor said. “Though I understand why you would try.”

    “Where am I?” Herbert wailed, and his arms shook in their bonds.

    “In the attic,” the Professor replied, matter-of-factly.

    “But my room is in the attic,” Herbert replied.

    “Well, this clearly isn’t your bedroom.”

    A pair of arms handed the Professor a chair from below. The Professor closed the door behind him and sat down on the chair in front of Herbert, on the cutting edge of the moonlight. 

    “What do you want with me?” Herbert cried.

    “Herbert, I’m going to be quite frank. I hate this house. And I want nothing more than to be out of it. But I can’t leave until you tell me where it is.” 

    Herbert looked through watery eyes at the Professor. “Where what is?” He asked. 

    “Herbert, don’t play games with me. We need to know where the artifact is.” 

    Herbert’s eyes scattered this way and that across the floor of the attic. “I don’t understand.” 

    “I’m not looking for you to understand!” The Professor shouted. “Where is the artifact that Ponce de León gave you?”

    “The artifact…” Herbert whispered to himself.

    The Professor stood to his feet and looked at the pendulum above Herbert. The metal disk was slightly lower than before. He rolled his eyes and sighed. His feet wandered around the room, in and out of shadows. 

    “Herbert,” he kept saying, “don’t play games with us.” 

    “Is Mr. Dauer behind this?” Herbert asked. “I saw him in the shadows.” 

    The Professor stopped walking and looked at him. “There’s no one else here, boy,” he refuted. “Nothing but your nightmares.” He stomped his feet closer to Herbert and sat down. “I don’t care about your fears or thoughts, boy! I want to get out of this frozen house. And I want to get out now! Tell me, where is the artifact of the Army of Bones?” 

    “Why do you want it?” Herbert looked away and dried his cheek against his shoulder. “It doesn’t work anymore, anyway. Ponce de León put a new one in the gate.” 

    “There is no new artifact!” 

    Herbert was silent. 

    “Fine,” the Professor whispered. He reared his hand back and held it in the air for a moment. Herbert looked at it and watched the lightning flash against it. The hand came down violently and struck Herbert across the ear and temple. His ear rang and his glasses skipped across the floor. “Tell me where that god-awful artifact is now or I will have your nightmares rip you to shreds.” 

    Herbert’s body convulsed, and his mouth couldn’t form words. 

    “Foolish sheep,” the Professor said. “What did that ghost see in you, anyway?” He turned around and stomped his foot on the floor. The door next to his feet creaked open and two hands reached up. The Professor handed the chair down. 

    “My sisters and Aaron know you are a vampire,” Herbert whispered. “They will come find me.”

    “They might know who I am,” the Professor replied without turning to look at him. “But they won’t find you.” He slammed the door shut, and the lock wiggled and latched. 

    Herbert looked around the room one more time to make sure he was alone. Lightning lit the corners of the wooden slats holding up the roof. Nothing was in the attic but cobwebs, shivering from the house’s vibration, and the massive pendulum above him. He watched the strange sharp disc minutely shift overhead like its waltz was coming down. 

    He closed his eyes and squeezed two long tears out of them. A chime erupted from the pendulum and the room shook. He screamed and pulled at the ropes, trying to cover his ears from the powerful noise—like a gong blasting out of a colossal clock. It vibrated down the floorboards and throughout the house below. 

    The sound faded, but his ears continued ringing. He whimpered in the darkness until the patter of rain returned to his ears.


  • The Kidnapping


    The Kidnapping

    Chapter 3

    That night, the boys bunked together on the floor of Herbert’s room on the third story, which if you remember from the last book was steepled like a tower. The storm howled outside and beat against the rickety wooden walls. Lightning flashed her violent eyes through the window and filled the room with hot, white light. A brief, ominous glow shimmered on each of the boy’s faces, followed by a rich, deep darkness and haze. Each sudden blast left the boys blinking away red drooping splotches falling down the insides of their eyelids.

    “Do you think the girls are alright?” Herbert whispered.

    “Why wouldn’t they be?” Aaron asked. 

    “Because of Professor Wolfgang.”

    “He’s up to no good,” Aaron replied. “But Marian is smart. She’ll lock the door like us.”

    “What are we gonna do?” 

    “Sleep, hopefully.” Aaron was short in response, but not because he was irritated with Herbert. Rather, Aaron didn’t enjoy thinking about things he couldn’t control. He took responsibility for Herbert, and at the moment, butterflies were filling his stomach. 

    “I meant in the morning,” Herbert said.

    “I know.” Aaron heaved and flung his head to the other side of the pillow. 

    Herbert was silent. He turned on his side and stared into the darkness under his drawer. 

    Aaron sighed. The storm whistled and whined. The window flashed and Aaron saw the back of Herbert’s head. A low rumble hovered in the sky, and for a moment, the house shook.

    “One time, I was playing this video-game,” Aaron said matter-of-factly, mustering up his voice to sound unconcerned. “I kept getting to the final boss level in World Eight-Four. But every time, I died right at the end. I played that level a hundred times in one day trying to get it right, but no matter what, I kept dying.”

    Herbert turned on his back and looked at Aaron’s black silhouette. 

    “Finally, I went to sleep,” Aaron continued. “And I had a dream about that level. I got through the maze, the water-world, the flying-fish, and face-to-face with the Boss. I ran at him just like before, but this time I jumped a moment sooner and got through the flying axes and over his head. Then he died, and I saved the princess. When I woke up, I knew it would work. I turned on the video-game and beat it in one try.”

    Lightning flashed her eyes through the window again, and the boys could see each other’s faces again. 

    “Maybe all we need to do is get some sleep,” Aaron said. “And we’ll know how to beat the Boss in the morning.” 

    Herbert smiled. “Goodnight, Aaron.” 

    “Night, Herbert.”


    Herbert opened his eyes. The sky outside was still dark. The storm had left, but the room still felt heavy and threatening. Herbert swore a strange noise had woken him. His eyes scanned the room, but nothing made sense in the twilight. His shoulder blade stung and his hand was numb. He pulled the arm free from under his body and blanket and shook it gingerly. 

    Tap. Tap. Tap.

    His head jerked toward the door. Something scurried at its base. He thought he saw a light shimmer through the bottom for a moment. 

    Tap. Tap. Tap, came the noise again.

    “Aaron?” Herbert whispered, but Aaron was fast asleep. 

    He closed his eyes and pulled the blanket over his face. His little arms shook and his heart held still. He thought about strange creatures crawling on the ground, trying to squeeze under his door. When he slept alone, the open closet ofttimes became a hiding place for monsters and evil creatures. His hung clothing looked like the tentacles of a horrific bogeyman. The light dancing off the toy cars were menacing eyes watching him. Even the fan sounded awfully like the breath of a Minotaur. Tonight, the monster was outside the door, scratching to get in and pressing against his sanity. 

    But none of that makes sense, he told himself. It must be a tree scratching the siding in the wind. A raccoon running along the rooftop. Aaron was with him. Monsters weren’t real. 

    His heartbeat came back. The tapping faded. 


    Some time later, Aaron slapped his hands on the ground and shot up from his laying position on the floor. He squatted on his knees next to Herbert’s sleeping body. The sound of music was in the air. A pleasant, still melody, but it sent a creepy chill down his spine. The storm had brewed again, and thunder rumbled in the darkness. 

    Aaron relaxed a bit, sat on his haunches, and listened to the music. It floated in the air, and though it was quiet and seemingly from a great distance, it enveloped him. The sound tightened his chest. 

    It reminded him of his mother on the worst day of his life. Pain and tears had filled her eyes. From the front porch, the two of them had watched the officers take his father away. She had screamed and grabbed hold of him. He was only five at the time. Since that day, he had scoffed when people described things as “heartbreaking”. Others wished they knew what a broken heart felt like. He wished he forgot. He had never seen his father again. 

    “Is that music?” Herbert sat up next to him.

    “More concerning—” Aaron whispered back. “It’s voices.”

    Herbert clenched his jaw, glared at the door frame, and wondered if it were possible to make his ear hear better. After a moment, he made out a low mutter. There were two of them. Little murmurs from somewhere in the shadows of the house on the other side of the door. Then a sharp, raspy voice, like chains dragging across sand, and underneath it all, the tap-tap-tapping from earlier. 

    “Who are they?” Herbert asked. 

    “Shh,” Aaron ordered. He crouched to the floor and crept out of his blanket toward the door. 

    “—No, it isn’t…” said one of the deep murmurs. “I already looked there.” Aaron thought the voice sounded like the Professor. 

    “I didn’t ask for your opinion.” The raspy voice was perturbed. “We will only work in sureties, and that means doing what is necessary.” Pause. “Do you understand what this means?” 

    “I do,” said the other deep murmur, and Aaron thought it sounded even more familiar. 

    Aaron leaned closer to make sure of who it could be, but the floor board creaked underneath. 

    Tap. Tap. Tap. The sound was sharp, quick and alerting. It was just on the other side of the frame. 

    The voices abruptly hushed, and the first murmur muttered something angry and incomprehensible. Aaron looked back at Herbert. He was wide-eyed and panicked. The tapping had stopped, but something scurried away from the door like chattering teeth. Aaron crawled to his spot next to Herbert, and the boys attempted to fall asleep again.


    Aaron dreamed he was canoeing in a strange wooden boat, at the back behind Marian, Herbert and another boy he couldn’t recognize. They were alone in a deep, shimmering black cave. Bats swooped down from their dens and darted past them toward an enormous hole in the cave’s ceiling, leading to the outside sky. Light tunneled through it, forming a massive beam of orange and brown. 

    The water sparkled in the orange-brown light, and Aaron guessed it was hundreds of feet deep. He looked all around at the bizarre rock formations and wondered where to find the exit, while also suspecting that they were lost and it was all Marian’s fault. Then, suddenly, Marian stood in the center of the boat and dove at Herbert. She was on top of him, flailing her arms and beating him senseless. Herbert screamed for Aaron’s help. She tied a rope around his hands and ankles. Herbert screamed again. 

    “Aaron!” 

    Aaron’s eyes shot open. Two large shadows were scuffling in the dark next to him and dragging something from the spot Herbert slept at. One was tall and stiff; the other was short and round. Herbert’s little body was in their hands, writhing and wriggling, bound at the wrist and feet. The short and round figure shoved a sock down his open mouth. 

    “Herbert!” Aaron cried and hit the tall, stiff shadow carrying Herbert’s flailing body. The large shadow reciprocated with its backhand. 

    Aaron stumbled across the room into Herbert’s dresser, dropped to his knees, and gasped for air. He picked himself up, clenching his jaw and weeping in rage. The two figures walked toward the door. Herbert’s body thrashed and kicked in their arms. 

    Aaron rushed again and dropped his shoulder like a linebacker. He aimed for the short figure this time and hit it square against the chin and collarbone. It doubled over and cried out in pain. Aaron shoved his fist into its face. He felt spit and blood on his knuckles. 

    The stocky shadow grabbed at Aaron’s shoulders. It was his height, but much stronger than him. The silhouette of an arm raised in the air, and Aaron closed his eyes to prepare for the impact. A fist pounded into his temple, and the world became blurry and sideways. He couldn’t breathe, and gravity was slowly dropping him to the ground like a falling leaf. He hit it hard, gasped for breath, and dabbed his face disconcertedly. 

    The stocky figure reached down for him again, but Aaron came to and jumped to his feet. The back of his head hit the shadow in the face. He leaped on the chest and dug his fingernails into its back. He felt something floppy and wet against his cheek and bit into it. It was the shadow’s ear. He ripped a chunk of flesh off and the little shadow screamed in horror. 

    Aaron bounced off the shadow and spit the chunk of ear onto the ground. The stocky shadow was screaming and on the ground, writhing. Aaron smirked, but in the scuffle, he lost track of the tall, stiff shadow. A heavy fist hit him in the back of the head and he fell to the ground. The world spun, and he lost consciousness. 


  • The Piano’s Song


    The Piano’s Song

    Chapter 2

    The sun peeked its bright face over the enchanted forest in the east. The west wind swept through the live oak in the Dolor’s backyard. Mr. Dolor had built a treehouse in the massive oak when the children journeyed through the forest. Unbeknownst to him at the time, the town had claimed it to fame decades before as the oldest tree in the city, naming it “Old Senator”. After Mr. Dolor created the treehouse, it angered many of the locals, and they threatened to tear it down. 

    However, for the time being, it represented a nice meeting area for the children to gather in the cool of the day. A woodpecker pounced in staccato circular fashion along a branch above, murmuring to himself and searching for insects under the bark. Marian looked at it while recounting to Aaron the history of strange behavior the Professor possessed—from his fear of garlic, to his long canines, and the fact Esther caught him chewing on a dead rat from his pocket.

    “So he’s creepy and doesn’t like garlic,” Aaron said, unamused. He leaned his back against a branch to see the bird Marian was staring at. His feet propped up on a smaller branch running perpendicular from him and avoided the two-by-four Marian leaned against opposite him. Esther hunched in the corner with her elbow resting on her knee and her fist pressed into her cheek. Herbert sat between her and Aaron and cleaned his glasses for the tenth time that morning. Aaron ran his hand through his shaggy red hair and squinted. “It doesn’t exactly make him a vampire.” 

    “It’s a lot of things,” Herbert interjected. “You just—you just have to meet him.” 

    “I get it,” Aaron said. “I miss the forest, too. And I miss Balaam and Ponce. But that doesn’t mean there are monsters out here anymore.”

    “But—” Herbert insisted.

    “We closed the gate.” Aaron made eye-contact with each Dolor, one-at-a-time. “Ponce said we were done. I don’t like grown-ups anymore than anyone. But it feels like—”

    “You don’t know what it feels like,” Marian interrupted. “The Professor showed up right after we opened the gate last month.”

    “We might be wrong, Aaron,” Esther said, playing with the marigold in her pigtail. “But we might be right. And how much worse is that?”

    “Okay,” Aaron sighed. “So what do we do?” 

    “We tell Mom and Dad?” Herbert asked. 

    The treehouse was silent. For the few weeks in St. Augustine, the children had grown accustomed to doubting their parents would jump to listen or believe them. 

    “I’m not afraid of some stupid grown-up,” Aaron said, and smacked the floor of the treehouse. “I’ll just come over and spend the night with my buddy, Herbert.” The boys smirked at one another and extended hands out, wiggling their fingertips together in brotherly fashion.

    “And if he is a vampire?” Marian asked soberly. 

    “We stop at nothing until we get your parents to believe,” Aaron replied. “Or kick him in the butt until he leaves.” 

    “Anyone got any garlic?” Esther asked.


    Mr. Dolor didn’t like Aaron very much. He considered him disrespectful and ornery because of his snide remarks and lack of eye-contact. Mrs. Dolor fancied him, though, mostly because he liked her, too. She reminded him of how his mother acted when he was younger. Regardless, both parents appreciated their children had a loyal friend. Therefore, the Dolors welcomed Aaron often, and tonight was no different. 

    That evening, another storm had picked up and was busy thrashing outside the Dolor’s home while the family and guests ate. The dinner table was too small for the seven individuals to gather. So the children ate around the coffee table in the living room as the grown-ups huddled in the dining room and discussed the meal, weather, President, and other nonsense that only adults enjoy talking about. 

    “What do you think about him?” Herbert asked Aaron.

    “He is strange,” he replied. “I’ll give you that. But vampire?”

    “Did you see his teeth?” Esther whispered.

    Aaron opened his mouth and pulled his upper lip back to reveal his teeth like a clown. Herbert looked down at his food. Mrs. Dolor made the Professor’s favorite: steak. He pushed the plate away.

    “Look, I won’t doubt any of you,” Aaron said. “I know what we’ve been through. But what does a vampire want with your dad?” 

    Marian ate in silence. She kept thinking about the first time her dad forgot about her at a business meeting. Mr. Dolor had invited her to a special daddy-date in Cocoa Village for ice-cream. She’d worn her favorite dress and her mother had made her hair extra special. But when she sat with her dad on the bench, each licking their ice-cream, he kept glancing at his watch. 

    After a few moments, he kissed her on the head and told her a friend needed to meet with him about work. He had promised it wouldn’t take long. But soon after, she was staring at a pigeon eating his melted ice-cream off the brick sidewalk. An hour later, he came back frustrated and eager to leave. That was the first time his work life had hurt her. She had that feeling in her stomach again tonight. 

    A plate slammed onto the table, and a fork clanged on the floor. The children jumped up and looked at the dining room. Mrs. Dolor stood next to the table, shocked. Mr. Dolor stared at her, holding his plate that he had just slammed firmly onto the table. The Professor sat at the head of the table, cutting another piece of meat and shoving it into the side of his mouth. 

    “What are you talking about?” Mr. Dolor fumed.

    “I just don’t understand why Herbert needs to move out of his room for the Professor,” Mrs. Dolor cringed.

    “If the Professor wants a room to himself, then we should accommodate him,” Mr. Dolor demanded.

    “He has his friend over, honey,” Mrs. Dolor said. “Can we talk about this in private?” 

    “No!” Mr. Dolor shouted. “We are going to talk about it right here and right now.” 

    “It’s alright,” Professor Ludwig Wolfgang held his palms up. “I shouldn’t have asked. I’m fine with another night on the couch.”

    Mr. Dolor took his glare away from Mrs. Dolor and smiled at the Professor. “I’m sorry, Professor,” he said.

    “The last thing I want to do is drive a wedge between you two,” the Professor said. “Ugh!—I gorged myself. I’ll be excused to the washroom.” He stood and left the room. 

    The Dolor children stared at their parents sitting at the table in silence. A candle flickered between them like a fading dancer. Aaron put his hand on Herbert’s shoulder. A few awful, silent minutes passed before Mr. Dolor pushed his chair back and left the room. 

    Something slow and musical was washing over the house like a melting, frozen wave. Deep, low hums crawling along the floor; then a string of frail notes, hammered by prancing mallets, floating in the air. A song—like cloudy September rain—lulled under a sustain pedal’s compression. The sound skated, twirled, and leapt into the children’s ears. It sounded beautiful and terrifying; altogether enrapturing, beguiling, seductive, and abhorrently repulsive, wicked, and sinister. Esther described it later, “like a lion that stares at its prey before it strikes.” 

    “What is it?” Marian asked.

    “Music, stupid,” Aaron replied flatly.

    Marian punched him in the arm. “I mean, where is it coming from?” 

    “The study,” Esther answered. “It’s dad’s old piano.”

    The haunting melody froze the children. But it wasn’t their father playing it. Down the hall past the washroom, opposite the garage, the Professor sat at the piano bench, lowered his head between his shoulders, and pounded at the keys in repetitive violence. Mr. Dolor stood in the hall between the Professor and his wife. His eyes glossed over and his mouth fell open as if intoxicated with wine. He leaned against the wall when his knees buckled. 

    At the dining-room table, Mrs. Dolor appeared indistinguishable. Her shoulders pulled back, and her neck straightened. Her mouth lay agape and her head nodded in slow motion. Tapping on the table, her fingers jittered in syncopated rhythm, following the movement of the Professor on the piano.

    “What’s wrong with them?” Esther whispered.

    “I don’t know,” Marian replied.

    The group left the living-room and approached Mrs. Dolor. 

    “Mom?” Marian said, placing her hand on her mother’s shoulder.

    Aaron waved his hand in front of her face. She didn’t blink or alter her tapping. Herbert continued past the kitchen and found his father in the hall. He tugged at his shirt. Mr. Dolor didn’t notice.

    The Professor stepped around the entrance to the study. He stood in the middle of the hallway nearest Mr. Dolor and Herbert. Lightning cracked outside and illuminated the Professor. His silhouette loomed in stark contrast. The piano played in the study without him.

    “Dolor,” the Professor addressed the children’s father. “If I am to sleep on the couch again, I presume you wouldn’t mind if I invited some friends to our house tonight.”  

    “Of course, Professor,” Mr. Dolor sounded like a zombie. “The more the merrier.”

    “Splendid.” the Professor snapped his fingers, and the music stopped. Mr. and Mrs. Dolor blinked and shook their heads like waking from a dream. They squinted their eyes and cringed in pain, putting their hands against their foreheads. 

    The Professor stepped past the children and parents into the living room. He removed a bottle of liquor from his luggage and went to the kitchen. “That’s enough for now.” He smiled to himself and poured the spirit into a glass.

    “What are you doing here?” Marian demanded. Her hand was on her mother’s. 

    Professor Ludwig Wolfgang pulled the glass from his lips and swallowed. He smiled at Marian and the others. “You’ll just have to wait to see,” he said.


  • A Stranger Comes to Visit


    A Stranger Comes to Visit

    Chapter 1

    Growing up is complicated. Doing it alone is near impossible. We need each other to listen, to cry, to laugh, to hope, and to rescue. And when we cannot be with others like us, things get very, very difficult. This is the story of how three children saved the world, but didn’t know it yet. Their names are Marian, Esther, and Herbert Dolor, but everyone at school refers to them as “those peculiar Dolor children”. That is because the Dolors live in a very old house on the edge of a very old Enchanted Forest. And ever since Herbert removed an artifact that locked its gate, mysterious individuals seem to find the Dolors. Even though the children, with their friend Aaron, had discovered the Fountain of Youth and succeeded at closing and locking the gate, they also learned that the gate was never meant to keep monsters in the forest, but rather to keep them out. Sinister individuals like Mr. Dauer seek to take control of the forest and fountain. And the Ghost of Sir Ponce de León warned about unfortunate things to come now that the gate had opened. Knowing when or from where those things will come is something the children have yet to find out. 

    A few weeks had passed since the children closed the gate of the Enchanted Forest, and everything felt dandy and pleasant, even though a storm had brewed itself up outside and made the air stuffy and humid like a lukewarm sauna. The three Dolor children were at the dining table, playfully reminiscing about their time in the forest, awaiting their tardy father and watching their tireless mother prepare dinner.

    Finally, the front door scraped open against the wooden floorboards and the children turned to cheer and embrace Mr. Dolor. But they couldn’t get to him because Mr. Dolor’s hands were full of obtuse, stacked boxes, dangling bags, and loose papers. And all of it was dripping water all over the entryway of the home. 

    “What’s all that, dear?” Mrs. Dolor asked, twisting her head back from her work at hand—a boiling pot of spaghetti and bubbling pan of sauce.

    Mr. Dolor dropped the things on the floor with a loud bang, and kicked the door shut behind him. He was irritated and distracted, but only for a moment, doing his best to acknowledge his diligent wife and happy children. But the miserable rain and an overall anxiety was upon him. “I told you already, honey,” he huffed and puffed, throwing his jacket off his shoulders as if it were the day of duties still clutching hold of him. He rethought that statement, took and breath, and started over with a grin. “I’m thrilled about the direction our business is heading!” He paused and waited for Mrs. Dolor to turn her head again and nod and smile her approval at him. He continued on, “New real estate. New banking partners. New opportunities—oh good, you made a spot for him at the table.” He stepped forward into the amber dining light and pulled a chair beside Marian. “Kids, my boss will be staying with us for a little bit until we get it all figured out.” 

    The children looked at one another in disbelief and then back at the front door, which had just been flung open. A figure dressed in a long black trench coat and gray felt fedora—that dripped rainwater from its brim onto the wooden floors—was standing at the threshold. Lightning cracked behind him, and his shadow cast against the hallway walls.

    “Children, you remember Professor Ludwig Wolfgang,” Mr. Dolor said, standing to his feet.

    The kids said nothing as the Professor dropped two duffel bags on the floor next to the pile Mr. Dolor had already created. “Ah,” the Professor said, “home sweet home.”

    “Professor,” Mr. Dolor approached him like a humble servant. “Please, let me take your coat.” 

    “Yes, that would be splendid,” the Professor replied. 

    Marian turned to her mother. “Living with us?” She said, exasperated.

    “Don’t be rude,” Mrs. Dolor whispered. “It’s only temporary.” 

    “Yes, that’s right, dearies,” Mr. Dolor hung the coat on the rack while shutting the door behind the Professor. “We have the pleasure of welcoming my boss into our home for the next few days while he settles a court issue with his wife and the business. Nothing to be alarmed about—it’s all just some silly misunderstanding on the side of his divorcée. But we have the benefit of blessing the Professor with our hospitality in this season.” 

    “I’d rather my personal matters remain personal, Dolor,” the Professor said, sitting down at the head of the table in Mr. Dolor’s spot, and Mr. Dolor blushed. “Oh, it’s spaghetti again,” the Professor muttered, looking at the plate Mrs. Dolor had just placed in front of him. 

    “Yes,” Mrs. Dolor said. “It’s the kids’ favorite.” She smiled at him, but noticed his discontent.

    “I am sorry for misspeaking, Professor,” Mr. Dolor apologized. “It won’t happen again.” He sat at the extra spot Mrs. Dolor had prepared between the Professor and Herbert.

    “Yes, yes, it’s quite alright,” the Professor brushed it off. “And I do suppose I don’t want to intrude or cause—oh, let’s say, a burden to your household in these next few days. I’m perfectly fine sleeping in a guest bedroom.”

    “Oh,” Mrs. Dolor said, holding her fork frozen in air with a noodle dangling off the end. “We’ve only just recently moved to St. Augustine, Professor. And we haven’t quite finished setting up any guest bedrooms, yet.” Marian watched her father’s face spin through an array of expressions of horror, regret, shame, and frustration across the table. “But I set a place on the couch in the living room,” Mrs. Dolor admitted.

    The Professor closed his eyes and smiled. “That’s fine, Mrs. Dolor,” he encouraged, but the kids didn’t think he was happy at all. 

    The children glanced back and forth from one another’s eyes. The room felt empty and wide. Everything was silent, except a long slow slurp of noodle running through Herbert’s lips. 

    “Do you know why people call it the living room?” Professor Ludwig Wolfgang blurted out. 

    “Oh, please tell us,” Mr. Dolor smiled and nodded, while the children looked anxious.

    “A long time ago, when people were more often sick, and hospitals were harder to come by—they called it the death room. And you would take your sick loved-ones to die in the front room. The local doctor could monitor them easily at the front of the house when he visited. I suppose once people stopped getting sick, and hospitals became conventional, people didn’t like the notion of one of their common rooms deemed a “death room”, any longer. Interesting.” 

    The table fell silent again, and Herbert slurped another long noodle off his fork.

    “Very interesting,” Mr. Dolor smiled.

    “May I be excused?” Marian asked her mother.

    “And me?” Esther added.

    “And me!” Herbert shouted after jumping from his seat.

    The three of them scurried into the hallway washroom together. Marian shut the door behind and locked it. Her palms pressed against the wooden door like she needed to hold it shut for a moment’s breath, as if making sure they were really alone. Then her head spun around in excitement. “What in the world is going on?” She galled.

    “He’s a vampire!” Herbert shouted and covered his mouth when the words spilled out.

    “I thought he was supposed to go away when we shut the gate,” Marian reflected aloud.

    “Yes!” Esther said. “But when we shut the gate, it was to keep the Fountain safe and monsters away. I don’t think the Professor was ever in the forest to begin with.”

    “Just like Dauer.” Marian nodded.

    “Then why did he show up—become Dad’s boss—right after I broke off the artifact?” Herbert asked.

    “I don’t know, Herbert,” Marian replied. “But he’s here and there’s not much we can do about that now.”

    “I wish Mom and Dad would see how creepy he is,” Esther said.

    “I don’t expect creepiness has anything to do with it, Ess,” Marian replied. “He’s Dad’s boss and Dad thinks he’s good.”

    “It’s like that time Mom and Dad drank that glass of wine,” Herbert whispered.

    “I think it’s a little worse than that, Herb,” Esther replied, and rolled her eyes at him. 

    “Did Ponce de León say anything about this?” Marian asked.

    Esther shook her head. “Only what I told you,” she replied. “He made me think things were going to get really bad, though.”

    The walls of the bathroom felt small and lonely.

    “So what do we do?” Herbert asked.

    “We stick together tonight,” Marian said. “Herbert, you sleep on our floor. That way, we can look out for each other.”

    Herbert nodded and hugged Marian. 

    “Is there any way we can prove it to Mom and Dad?” Esther asked. 

    “I wish we had Balaam or Starlight with us,” Marian thought aloud. “But I think little will convince them of what we know.” She brushed her shirt like she was brushing her fear off of it. “C’mon,” she said. “Let’s get ready for bed.” 


    The children changed their clothing, brushed their teeth, sipped glasses of water, and prayed with their mother before getting into bed. Marian fell asleep with ease, but Esther and Herbert sat up, restless. The idea of a vampire in the house spun their imagination until both knew sleep was hopeless. They resorted to play because not much else could distract their mind away from worry.   

    By the time they finished three rounds of 21 Questions and Herbert picked a different dinosaur every game, they played make-believe. There aren’t many pretend games that won’t wake older sisters, so Esther and Herbert chose Spies and Assassins, which is basically silent hide-and-seek.

    Esther closed her eyes and counted in her head to twenty, before sneaking around the bedroom in the dark and finding Herbert hiding behind Marian’s dresses in the closet. Herbert closed his eyes and counted silently before crawling under the bunk bed and grabbing Esther’s foot. Esther closed her eyes again and started counting. She heard the door creak and knew the game extended further than the bedroom now.

    Herbert crouched low to the floor, and his feet scurried underneath him, tiptoeing the edge of the hall rug. His pointer finger and thumb extended to look like he carried two pistols. He crawled to the right, ducked under the end table in the middle of the second-story hall, and waited. He watched Esther’s door slowly open, and a figure scurried out into the shadows. The shadowy assassin went to the left, the other way down the hall, before entering the bathroom. 

    Herbert stole from under the table and retreated down the stairwell. The third step creaked under his weight and he froze in excited fear. He looked behind him and didn’t see any movement or sound. He continued downward toward the front door of the house and took a right before dropping to all fours. 

    Creak…

    It was the sound of the Assassin Esther’s foot creaking on the third step, just like Spy Herbert’s. Herbert scampered away into the living room and crawled under the coffee table. Esther’s shuffling noises had disappeared. He popped his head up between the coffee table and the couch, peering out into the darkness, hoping to spot the assassin’s movement.  

    “Hello, Herbert.”

    Herbert jumped and slammed his forehead into the edge of the coffee table. Before he had even felt the pain, he shot his eyes around to see the Professor’s head laying on a pillow on the couch.

    “Ah! What do you want?” Herbert shouted.

    “I’m just resting, Herbert.” The Professor whispered. “What do you want?” 

    “Nothing,” Herbert backed himself underneath the coffee table and squirmed out the other end.

    Esther bounded into the living room. “Ha!” She cheered. “Caught you!” Her grin faded when she saw the Professor on the couch and remembered where their guest had been sleeping.

    “Say, Herbert,” the Professor said. “Where is a delectable young man like you supposed to be sleeping during the night?” 

    Herbert was speechless. 

    “He sleeps upstairs,” Esther stood beside Herbert. “With us.” 

    The Professor smiled and then frowned. “This is going to be quite a taxing adventure for all of us, isn’t it?” He said to himself. 

    “What do you mean?” Esther asked. 

    The Professor turned over on his side and pulled his fedora from the back of the couch. He placed it over his face. “Goodnight, Dolors,” he whispered.

    Esther and Herbert ran away without a word. They stomped up the stairs, stormed down the hallway, slammed the door shut, woke up Marian, and jumped under their covers. 


  • Home Sweet Home


    Home Sweet Home

    Chapter 19

    Late afternoon came with a cool breeze and lovely spirit. The pleasing opera of thrushes, jays, and wrens echoed in the forest. Wind swept inside the crown of the canopy and sent a shower of leaves below. In the distance, a crow’s caw faded away, and a woodpecker cackled under the sound of cicadas singing to the sun. A mile over the forest, clouds bellowed and an osprey chirped while she soared with them. A sandpiper tip-toed through the mud along the path and hid behind the tall grass that waved goodbye in the wind. 

    Esther skipped the entire way back, unsuccessfully containing the excitement her healed leg brought her. The children’s spirits were high. They felt like experts of the forest, passing on the same footpath numerous times. By the time they reached the summit of the sandy hill, they raced each other down the other side, playing tag, laughing, and screaming. With their accomplishment behind them, they held nothing in but joy and silliness. 

    They stopped their frolic when they heard two urgent voices crying through the trees in the distance. “Marian! Esther! Herbert!”

    “Mom and Dad,” Marian gasped.

    Sobriety fell on them like a brick, and each tucked their head between their shoulders and sprinted to the entrance of the forest. None of them said a word, but each felt an uncomfortable sensation in the pit of their stomachs. Like you get when you know your parent is unhappy, but you must go to them, regardless.

    They heard their parent’s speaking to one another on the other side of the pine grove. “Oh, Jesus, thank you—I can hear footsteps,” Mrs. Dolor said. “There!” Mr. Dolor shouted. 

    The children saw two blurry figurines through the tree-line racing toward them.

    “Esther Dolor,” Mrs. Dolor reprimanded, “I can’t believe you are out here with your hurt leg! And Marian—you know better than—Hello, is this your friend Aaron? Esther—you’re standing on your leg!”

    It may seem like Mrs. Dolor said a lot at first, but both parents were busy hugging and kissing the Dolor children while she said all of it. It delighted them to find all of them safe and together, and shocked them to find Esther’s leg completely healed. 

    “I suppose those sutures the doctor put on really did the trick,” Mr. Dolor said as the six of them exited the forest. “Kids—you know better than to leave without saying anything. You did this yesterday, and Esther was seriously injured from it. I’m glad she’s good now, but not again—do you understand?” 

    “Yes, sir,” the three avowed. 

    “My God—what is that!” Mr. Dolor shouted. For the earth was rumbling under the family’s feet, and the children were wondering if Maushop had returned. But it was the gate rattling and shaking as it slowly closed the left side, and then the right side, like an invisible hand were shutting it behind them.

    “Wow!” Mrs. Dolor said. 

    “How did—?” Mr. Dolor questioned.

    “Is it automatic?” 

    “Some kind of motion sensor.” 

    Meanwhile, Herbert was slowly backing away from the group, before dropping to his knees behind a vine on the right side of the protruding gate. He ran his fingers along the bottom, feeling for the familiar shape of the eight-point star. A strange sound came from the shadows, and for a moment, he thought the vine whispered or sneezed at him. He stared into the lattice, but chuckled at how silly that would be. His fingers found the hole at the bottom of the wall and he placed the new panther figurine Ponce de León had given him. Just as he had instructed.

    He dropped out of the vine and jumped to his feet, just in time to receive a hug from Aaron as he left. 

    “See you at the bus stop tomorrow,” Aaron said to the others, and picked up his bike. “Oh—” He stopped and held the machete out to Mr. Dolor. “This is yours.” 

    Mr. Dolor didn’t know whether to be proud or angry. He took the blade while Aaron rode away. 


    That night, Mr. and Mrs. Dolor let the children stay up late with them, watching a movie about talking ants fighting talking grasshoppers. The five of them sat bundled under a warm fluffy blanket on the couch and shared a bowl of caramel and kettle popcorn. 

    “I like the grasshopper that always jumps out of his skin!” Herbert laughed, and shoved a handful of caramel popcorn in his cheek.

    “The grasshoppers are the bad guys, Herbert,” Marian commented, not taking her eyes off the screen.

    “Yeah, I know,” Herbert muttered, with a mouthful of food.

    “Esther?” Mrs. Dolor asked when she noticed her daughter had left the room. “Where did she go?” 

    “I think she went to the bathroom?” Mr. Dolor responded, scrolling his finger along the face of his cell phone.

    Esther actually went upstairs. She didn’t want to watch the movie, because the talking animals and pretty plants reminded her of the Enchanted Forest, and that made her sad. She enjoyed remembering the forest, but she didn’t enjoy remembering it was closed now. 

    When she entered her room, her nose caught a whiff of something in the air and she smiled. “Marigolds,” she whispered to herself and looked around. But the room was quiet and empty.

    She sat on the edge of her bed and ran her fingers over her ankle and calf where the wound used to be. A jagged scar remained. She liked the way the skin looked bumpy and wondered if it would ever leave.

    A whiff of marigold hit her nose again, and this time she knew it had to be real. She followed the scent to the window where she discovered a small yellow bur marigold, just like the one she pulled from the riverbank. 

    “It will never wilt,” a soothing voice said from behind her. Esther spun around to the Ghost of Ponce de León shimmering blue in the middle of her bedroom. 

    “I thought you may like it to remember the forest,” he said.

    “Juan Ponce de León!” She shouted.

    “Marian has the logbook and Herbert has his artifact,” the Ghost smiled. “It only seems right you have your marigold.” 

    Esther looked at the flower, and a tear dropped onto the top of it. “Thank you,” she whispered, and carried it to her bedside.

    “I’m happy we met, Esther,” the Ghost said. “But I also came to warn you it’s going to get a lot harder now. And a lot worse. But remember that I’ll always be near. Just like in the forest.”

    “Oh,” she said. “Why are you telling this to only me?”

    “I’ll speak to your siblings when the time is right,” he said. “But you need to hear me say this. And you need it in your heart forever.” 

    “If it’s going to be so much harder—” she said, “—why don’t you stop it?”

    “Well, sometimes I try.” He sat down on the bed, which later Esther thought was funny, seeing as how he was a ghost. “But people have a nasty habit of impeding my trying to help. It’s very difficult, dare I say, impossible, to force someone to be good. You could force them to do good things, I suppose. But inside—that’s all up to them. And it’s that stuff inside that gets in the way when I’m trying to help.” 

    “It seems like you would be able to just show up and talk to someone, and they would listen.”

    “I thought the same thing too,” he said, “and then I got a poisoned arrow shot in my leg.” He winked at her. 

    “Oh, right,” she said, and giggled.

    “Anyway, don’t worry about all of that. As long as you know that I’ll always be here for you, you don’t need to worry about what everyone else thinks. And yes, it’s going to be hard. But that doesn’t mean you can’t make it through.”

    “Thank you, Señor Ponce de León,” she said.

    “Call me Juan,” he replied. “That’s what my friends call me.”

    Esther thought about that for a second, and said, “How about I just call you León? Juan feels disrespectful.”

    “Fair enough.”

    The two smiled and gave their goodbyes before the Ghost disappeared and Esther lay down to sleep. 


    The next few weeks went by with little significant happening. Although, now Aaron spent a lot more time with the Dolors at school. And he even went back to Vinnie the Rat to apologize for tricking him. Vinnie forgave him with little effort. Apparently, he always knew Aaron faked the photo, and it hardly consumed his thoughts anymore, ever since he started looking for new photos of strange beasts. 

    The children liked San Juan Bautista Elementary a lot more now. Marian’s teacher recognized her as the brightest in the class and often asked for her help during study hour. The girls in Esther’s class loved the immaculate marigold she wore in her pigtails. And no one dared make fun of Herbert for any reason, or they had to answer to Aaron. 

    One Friday afternoon, the children reminisced about their funniest stories in the forest, sitting at the kitchen table while Mrs. Dolor made dinner.

    “Remember the way Herbert looked riding on Aaron’s back in the swamp, with the glasses down around his face?” Marian laughed.

    “Yeah, he looked like a goofy cartoon,” Esther jeered. 

    “Well, what about Esther drooling all over herself while she napped on Balaam by the river?” Herbert giggled.

    “Oh, hilarious—but nothing was as funny as when Marian tripped in the brambles and got her butt stuck in that gopher tortoise’s hole!” Esther cackled. 

    “Balaam had to pull you out with his tail!” Herbert shouted. 

    All three roared with laughter. 

    “What are you three talking about?” Mrs. Dolor asked while stirring a pot of spaghetti. 

    “Nothing,” Marian said, and noticed six plates at the dinner table.  

    “I remember having fun,” said Herbert.

    “I did too,” Esther smiled.

    “And we got lots of ice-cream at Mr. Mewbourn’s.”

    “And a new treehouse!”

    “I remember breaking the figurine.”

    Marian laughed. “It’s okay, Herbert. We forgave you.”

    Just then, the front door opened and scraped the wooden floorboards. The children turned and cheered together, “Daddy!” 

    Mr. Dolor stepped through the threshold with his hands full of boxes, bags, and papers. He was sopping wet from the storm outside.

    “What’s all that, dear?” Mrs. Dolor asked.

    Mr. Dolor dropped the things on the floor with a loud bang. “I told you already, honey,” he huffed and puffed. “I’m thrilled about the direction our business is headed. New real estate. New banking partners. New opportunities—oh good, you made a spot for him at the table. Kids, my boss will be staying with us for a little bit until we get it all figured out.” 

    The children’s eyes popped when they watched the heavy footfalls of Professor Ludwig Wolfgang entering their home. He stood in the foyer, dressed in a black trench coat, water dripping from his fedora. 

    “Living with us?” Marian asked, shocked.

    “Ah,” Professor Ludwig Wolfgang sighed. “Home sweet home.”


    The End


←Previous Page
1 … 8 9 10 11 12 … 16
Next Page→

Sign up to receive new chapters, journal entries and poetry.


FOUR ELEVEN

Loading Comments...

    • Subscribe Subscribed
      • Keith G. Alderman
      • Join 60 other subscribers
      • Already have a WordPress.com account? Log in now.
      • Keith G. Alderman
      • Subscribe Subscribed
      • Sign up
      • Log in
      • Report this content
      • View site in Reader
      • Manage subscriptions
      • Collapse this bar